User:BL Elsner/Employment discrimination/Gurekosn Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

BL Elsner


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Employment discrimination


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
I like what you plan to change and add. I would consider looking into more depth in the Lead and adding more about the upcoming topics. The article looks to have many different sub headings which divide it well but maybe some can be eliminated if it is overly descriptive on unnecessary.