User:BUknight/Media Fatigue/Dutchstudent2608 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

BUknight


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:BUknight/Media_Fatigue?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * There is no current version of the article.

Evaluate the drafted changes
At first glance, the draft article on media fatigue looks very organized. The subsections make it very clear and easy to read. It's also very good that you used so many sources already for the information that you're giving, and I also think it's very good that everything that you mention in the lead is present in the following subsections. In the subsection of political and news media you mention 'psychological fatigue', perhaps you could explain in more detail what kind of psychological effects (both mental and physical) appear when people experience media fatigue and how those effects manifest themselves.

I don't know how much there is to find on media fatigue, but maybe it is possible to make the lead a little big bigger or explaining media fatigue there in just a little more detail. Overall, I find the article you wrote very good, it's easy to read but still enough scientific information and sources.