User:Bababrews/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Abortion Caravan

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
I chose to evaluate this article because it is a topic that interests me and it is important to learn about the history of the abortion caravan and it's influence within Canada. My preliminary impression of the article is that it the history section focuses directly on 1970 and nothing much leading up to 1970 or after it. As well, the "New Abortion Caravan" section is quite short and could be added to.

Evaluate the article
This article is a Start-Class article so I thought that it would be perfect for some improvement. The article's strength is the history section although a suggestion is that it could be seperated into smaller sections to accomodate different topics like the formation of the group or the travel over to Ottawa. The article could use some improvements in the section about The New Abortion Caravan seeing that there are only a few sentences about the topic, it could be expanded. As well, there isn't a picture for this article. The article has some good content but I believe that there could be changes and contributions made to improve the article.