User:Babak98/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Hashish (its a link)

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
the main reason i chose to work on this article comes from the fact that i have been cultivating cannabis(legally) for the past 4 years now and want to keep learning about the by products that come from Cannabis. I also noticed when i began reading this article that Cannabis apparently has a cultural route to Persia/Iran which I've never heard about until reading this.

Evaluate the article
to begin with I do have a vast knowledge on Cannabis and Cannabis relates products which puts me at a tough position here because I'm expecting this article to be rather detailed. my immediate first impression when reading the intro is that this is going to be a very outdated and not super detailed article about hash. while the intro paragraph does state the topic, it is all over the place after that and honestly other than the fact that I know it will be talking about hash, I don't know the exact points about it that will be discussed. I also notice that in one line it states hash is consumed more in Europe while concentrated are consumed more in America but then immediately goes on to explain that hash is a cannabis concentrate so by that logic concentrates are most consumed in both Europe and America. like I mentioned before I don't think that this article is up do date with information information and that it feels as if it hasn't been updated especially since legalization is occurring in more and more places I would expect the amount of detail and information to increase. On top of all this the photo used for hashish is one of the poorest looking quality of hash ever, you would think with the amount of Cannabis Cup winning hash strains that they would choose one that doesn't look so stepped on. my overall impression of the article is that it does go into somewhat detail the history of hashish, it unfortunately stops at the end of the 1990s which is extremely unfortunate because the last two decades have been where the most advancements in the cannabis industry has occurred which includes the popularization of ice water hash rosin. In my opinion once this article is more up to date it could be much better and honestly more informational.