User:Babieca51/Prokopy Zubarev/Optfrost Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Babieca51


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Babieca51/Prokopy_Zubarev?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Prokopy Zubarev

Evaluate the drafted changes
The current lead written for the draft does not reflect upon the greater amount of information added throughout the article. It is a bit short and could use a more specific summary of the article's information. The content added in the "Political Career" section is detailed and adds a lot of information lacking in the original article. However, it would greatly benefit from adding hyperlinks to several of the named groups and people, as well as more detailed citations. The "Trial" section is similarly detailed and informed. Be careful that the information is not overly similar and repeated to the already existing article for the trial itself.