User:Babs subs/Trilobite/Ldw15 Peer Review

General info
Babs subs
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Babs subs/Trilobite
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Trilobite

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead:

In your case, the lead was kept the same as the initial article. The lead is very detailed but concise considering the length of the article.

Content:

The content added is relevant to the topic and the sources are extremely recent, so the content is up-to-date. There does not seem to be content missing or content that does not belong.

Tone and Balance:

The content added is neutral as you state only facts and scientific interpretations of data. There does not seem to be any bias.

Sources and References:

The new content is supported by the sources provided, but citations should be added for the final draft as you indicated you would do. The sources are thorough and reliable given that they are peer-reviewed journal articles published in well-known journals. The links for the sources do work.

Organization:

The content added is well-written, clear, and easy to understand. The content is rather detail-heavy, so if possible, consider making it more concise. There are no spelling errors, and I only noticed one capitalization error. The heading of this section sums up the content well.

Images and Media:

No images were added, but there doesn't appear to be a need for this either.

Overall Impressions:

The content you added definitely improved the article, it is now more complete as it goes into more detail about the diet of trilobites using information that was recently published, keeping this article up to date. The content is only about the diet of one species of trilobite, but information on this topic is limited given extinction. The content could be improved by adding citations when appropriate like you said you would, condensing the information to make it more concise while keeping the most important parts, and potentially specifying that this information is only known to apply to the species of trilobite addressed in the peer-reviewed articles if applicable.