User:Babsonrw21/Campus Agrippae/Cornishgamehen Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

babsonrw21


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Babsonrw21/Campus_Agrippae?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Campus Agrippae

Evaluate the drafted changes
Very informative, and detailed. For "components," try adding subheaders for the different sections.

As far as content, there are parts that talk more about sources and less about Campus Aggripae itself. I would remove the bits referencing sources directly and instead limit it to direct references to CA.