User:BabyElephant3/Adriana Garcia/Jojobruin24 Peer Review

General info
BabyElephant3
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:BabyElephant3/Adriana_Garcia?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):N/A

Evaluate the drafted changes
This overall is a really solid draft, but a few minor edits would take it to the next level. Your About section works as a good lead, it touches on her life and education which is a good connection to the later section, but when it comes to discussing the themes of her work we don’t see as much discussion of them in the works or exhibitions sections. Your content is balanced between sections and well organized, but the use of a quote direct from the artist worries me since it sort of diminishes the neutrality of the article. You use in text citations really well throughout the article, and there is a solid repertoire of references. Aside from those concerns, the draft looks really good and sets you up really well to publish the article.