User:Babybear444/A Noiseless Patient Spider/Yazzymine688 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Babybear444


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Babybear444/A Noiseless Patient Spider
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * A Noiseless Patient Spider

Evaluate the drafted changes
The content added has provide a greater breadth of understanding to the poem's central ethos and I think that it was all objective and backed up by relevant sources.

- The strengths are that it created wider context.

- It could have a photo.