User:Bacarellam1/Literacy in the New Media Age by Gunther Kress/7mood575 Peer Review

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Bacarellam1


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 * User:Bacarellam1/Literacy in the New Media Age by Gunther Kress - Wikipedia


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Evaluate the drafted changes
The lead is concise and clear with updated content. It did well in giving a brief description of the major sections. The content is relevant and up to date with no equity gaps found. The tone is neutral throughout the article without taking any position. The article used the updated and working sources well to back up the information. The sources did good job in reflecting the knowledge on article's topic. The content is well written in a clear and concise manner. There are some grammatical and spelling errors in the article which I think can be easily corrected on first check. Added images will make the article more effective. Overall the article is good with relevant sources and content with a requirement of small improvements in organization and usage of media.