User:BadEnding/Sample space/Joycecs Peer Review

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BadEnding


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Evaluate the drafted changes
I think the existing content of the article is nicely written and easy to understand. The short description of granularity could be better explained or supplemented with an example. I would suggest adding a section on some things the article skips over, such as the null set, or maybe some of the operations on events, such as the complement or the union. Under multiple sample spaces, the multiplication could be written out mathematically. Some Venn diagram pictures may be also be a useful addition. Good Luck!