User:BadEnding/Sample space/Philipphaku Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

BadEnding


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:BadEnding/Sample_space?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Sample space

Evaluate the drafted changes
BadEnding did three minor edits to the article that make it more consistent.

The lead part has a few sentences that concisely describe the topic of the article. The content is up to date, neutral, and relevant to the topic.

The article provides examples that will help readers understand the topic efficiently. The two images in the article do not have any copyright issues, and they enhance understanding of the topic. The article does have a few grammatical errors, such as in the lead section, the sentence "the outcomes of the sample space denoted by points within the rectangle" misses "are" in between the words "space" and "denoted".

Multiple sources from a diverse spectrum of authors are used in the article. The links work and the use of the sources is well-balanced.

The article can be further improved by adding citations for verification, images or tables of rectangles that demonstrate the sample space virtually as mentioned in the lead part.