User:Baileyadams1/Gender dysphoria/Bdenson7718 Peer Review

Questions

 * 1) Does the article clearly define and explain the concept of gender dysphoria?
 * 2) Does the article accurately represent the current understanding of gender dysphoria in the scientific community?
 * 3) Does the article provide a balanced view of the potential causes and treatments for gender dysphoria?
 * 4) Does the article adequately address the potential impact of societal factors on the experiences of individuals with gender dysphoria?
 * 5) Does the article include perspectives and experiences of individuals with gender dysphoria, and if so, are they adequately represented?
 * 6) Are any studies or research cited in the article, and if so, are they relevant and properly cited?
 * 7) Is the language used in the article sensitive and appropriate for the topic of gender dysphoria?
 * 8) Are there any other important aspects of gender dysphoria that the article does not adequately address?
 * 9) Are there any factual errors or misleading information in the article?
 * 10) Overall, do you think the article is well-written and informative?

Critiques
There are a few sections of the article that are skimp and could use some additional information. These sections include the cause of gender dysphoria and the history of gender dysphoria.

From m understanding there is currently no consensus on the exact cause of gender dysphoria. Many factors, both biological and environmental, are thought to play a role in the development of gender dysphoria. Try looking into the different studies that support each of those theories.

Also I was unable to find any citations you used as references in the talk section of the article.

General info

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Evaluate the drafted changes
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