User:Baileybear1/Lake Norman/Rwaddell22 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Baileybear1 (username)


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Baileybear1/Lake_Norman?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Lake Norman

Evaluate the drafted changes
It's not clear to me where your edits are going or which section they're apart within the article. You could add a few wikilinks regarding some of the ghost stories you mentioned and lengthen the lead section, briefly giving detail to help the reader understand the article by that alone. Include In-text citations to support your facts to ensure credibility, and capitalize the "s" in skeletons in "Skeletons in the Columns". You could have some brief descriptions of how the links referenced can help better the article also. Your draft is pretty good but takes a persuasive turn towards the end in the last paragraph. It's important to remain neutral but overall, you included relevant facts that can be used in the article and worded it clearly.