User:Baileycoleman/Octopus bocki/KarolinaKaczmarski Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Bailey Coleman


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Octopus bocki


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
You have a detailed and researched Wikipedia page already! Here’s some recommendations that may help.

-       Nice work mentioning your species and where it can be found, along with a common name! I also enjoyed the mention of information that sticks out about your particular species (i.e. being nocturnal and using camouflage).

-       In “Anatomy and Morphology”, you discuss the reproductive aspects in such a way that is easy to understand and concise. I would only suggest adding more about the external structures.

-       I would also consider adding links within the text to perhaps expand upon certain words, complex topics, or locations.

-       Perhaps, in your “Intelligence” section, maybe you could provide information as to how intelligence is measure. How do they know octopi are the most intelligent? What made them test it?

-       Nice “taxobox”! It nicely partitions the writing and provides the information in a neat, ordered fashion.

-       The use of headings throughout the page looks nice, too!

-       I might suggest adding a few more references.

-       The page might be enhanced with some pictures: images may be found in the “Insert”, “Images and media” library. I believe all the images retrieved from there are free-to-use.

Your article looks really nice!! You can probably ignore some of these suggestions, but I think they might be beneficial. Happy writing! Karolina