User:Baileyld/Jorunna/Tds10 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(BaileyId)


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Baileyld/Jorunna?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Baileyld/Jorunna?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template

Evaluate the drafted changes
Description: Would be nice to know what type of habitat the animals prefer just as an introduction before the distribution part of the article. Make sure to add more details about thier diet. I think the paragraph at the top of the page should be included into this section. overall great start and explanation of the animal. just more detail is needed overall.

Taxonomy: There is a taxa box you can insert to make this section look better, or maybe you could do it using bullet points. Looks a little jumbled up to me.

Reproduction and survival: This part of the article is good but i feel like certain information does not need to go in this section. For instance, the part about them being toxic or using jellyfish could maybe go into the description to make it flow better and add more facts for the reader.

overall article: Overall the article is really good, I just think that there needs to be a little more detail in some areas to make this article perfect.