User:Baileypringle8/Water balance/TylerStrachan Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Bailey Pringle


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Baileypringle8/Water balance


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * User:Baileypringle8/Water balance

Evaluate the drafted changes
The content that has been added to this article is relevant to the topic at hand. The article does not have an introduction and it could use one in order to let readers know what they will be reading in the article. The content added is up to date and relevant as mentioned before. The tone of the article is a neutral tone and does not hold any biases. There is not any content that is over or under represented. The article provides two reliable sources to draw information from. The content is not plagiarized and is presented in a way that gives the reader sufficient information regarding the topic. I would advise the author to gather more sources and provide more information on the topic. Also nothing is hyperlinked in the article and I would advise the author to add those as well. The content is well written and is easy to read. There are not any photos provided in the article I would advise the author to add photos regarding the topic. Overall I thought the article was good and provided decent information to the reader.