User:Bails23/sandbox

The Wikipedia page I used was Esports


 * Is everything in the article relevant to the article topic? No, goes off topic about the Olympics.
 * Is there anything that distracted you? The section about the Olympics through me off a bit.
 * Is any information out of date? All of it is up to date.
 * Is anything missing that could be added? Could add in about new Battle Royale game that just came out.
 * What else could be improved? It could add in about what championships the Esports teams have won.
 * Is the article neutral? Yes
 * Are there any claims that appear heavily biased toward a particular position? No
 * Are there viewpoints that are overrepresented, or underrepresented? No
 * Do the links work? Yes
 * Does the source support the claims in the article? Yes
 * Is each fact referenced with an appropriate, reliable reference? Yes
 * Where does the information come from? Multiple online websites
 * Are these neutral sources? Yes
 * If biased, is that bias noted? N/A
 * What kinds of conversations, if any, are going on behind the scenes about how to represent this topic? There are none
 * How is the article rated? N/A
 * Is it a part of any WikiProjects? Yes, it is a part of the video games section of WikiProjects.


 * Sources: https://mindcology.com/depression/sexual-frustration-leads-depression-loneliness/
 * https://www.psychologytoday.com/us/blog/the-squeaky-wheel/201109/marriage-and-sexual-frustrations-inevitable-or-solvable
 * https://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/pubmed/1262489
 * https://www.bustle.com/articles/9879-sexual-frustration-can-be-bad-for-your-health-and-thats-not-just-a-pickup-line

The game plan: The plan is to look over the Wikipage that is about sexual frustration to see if there is any grammatical errors. After that we will see if there is any missing information that could be added. We will also take out any information that is irrelevant. We will then make sure our work is not plagiarized and that it is cited.

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It looks like the 4 tildes by themselves don't work. You could switch the view to source editing and click the button with 4 tildes.Dr AB Swan (talk) 20:57, 10 February 2019 (UTC)

You are missing your game plan for editing your article. I don't see sources or any additional information. --Dr AB Swan (talk) 16:22, 16 February 2019 (UTC)