User:Baller2684/Military/Shilohf Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

user:Baller2684


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Baller2684/Military
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Military - Wikipedia

Evaluate the drafted changes
(I would like to preface this by saying my knowledge on this topic is very limited)

The peer has decided to make some changes to the introduction sentence, add content, subheadings and images. In the introduction "armed forces" seems to be followed by a quick definition, if you are changing to "armed soldiers" and these are not interchangeable terms, make sure you update the rest of the sentence to fit that. I think the content that they plan on adding looks great, my only advice is to make sure that you have reliable sources and that you paraphrase the information. In addition to adding new content, I like that you are going to put a new subheading, I think this will keep the article organized. Lastly, adding updated graphs is a great idea, do you already have those picked out or is the 2019 graphs the most recent ones? Overall, I think your plans to contribute to this article look great!