User:Bam margesimpson/Danu (Irish goddess)/Bam margesimpson Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

CDMixtape


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Danu (Irish goddess)
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Danu (Irish goddess)
 * Danu (Irish goddess)

Evaluate the drafted changes
The etymology section is very well put together and gives a balanced breakdown of the origins of the goddess' name with viewpoints from multiple sources. I think that your plan to add information on the family tree is a great idea that will add valuable information to the article. I think that another good way to make additions would be to add more information to the introduction paragraph since it is vary sparse, and the last sentence of it "Though primarily seen as an ancestral figure, some Victorian sources also associate her with the land." is kind of confusing.