User:Bananannah02/Walmart/Kingflyp Peer Review

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She does a good job of explaining Walmart's global reach by showing that it's one of the biggest companies in the world with more than 10,000 stores and 2.1 million workers. By highlighting just how big Walmart's operations are, it gives us a better look on the effect that Walmart's production model can have on the environment because of the energy they use in their shops and for transportation, as well as the trash they make from products and packaging.

Does a good job of highlighting how Walmart has done a lot to help the earth by investing in clean energy and cutting down on waste, among other things. However, it could give more detailed examples and data that can be useful to understand how well these programs have worked. Also, talking about the problems Walmart is having making its business more environmentally friendly would give a fuller picture of the company's efforts.