User:Bananfran/Demons (1971 film)/Monicavaldez Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Mackenzie Barnes and Bananfran


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Draft:Demons (1971 film)


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Does not exist

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

The topic for your project is very interesting and eye-catching since there's not much information on it already. All of the information presented in this draft is very thorough with going into detail about the cast, plot, and director. There is a lack of visual representation in this draft, if there were pictures of scenes from this film or pictures of the people involved in this film it would make this draft more effective. As for the sources being current, that was difficult for this particular topic because of the year this film was released. You both did the best you could for the year your topic was in, the sources were relevant and added more information to the topic, great job! The overall tone of this draft is very neutral, however there are a few punctuation errors within the middle section of the draft.