User:Bandoputt/Patrick Mahomes

"He committed to Texas Tech University.[24] " - I feel as if this could be a little clearer. Maybe add the date that he committed to the university/ add more information.

"Following the Oklahoma game, the Red Raiders defeated TCU before dropping three consecutive games to finish outside bowl eligibility with a 5-7 record." -Maybe change the word "following" to "Preceeding" I believe it would be more appropriate in this context.

" Best NFL Player ESPY Award, and was named Kansas City Club 101 Awards AFC Offensive Player of the Year. "- I feel as though this sentence could be a little more clearer. Maybe change it to " Best NFL Player ESPY Award and was named AFC Offensive Player of the Year at the Kansas City Club 101 Awards."

"Mahomes asked his coaching staff to call the play Jet Chip Wasp, and successfully completed a deep pass to Tyreek Hill for 44 yards. This shifted momentum towards the Chiefs, who in the remaining minutes of the game went on a 21–0 run, securing their first Super Bowl victory in 50 years." - The phrase "This shifted.." I feel is not clarified enough. Change to "This play".