User:Bandzvlad/Mohammed Khadda/Immenseseagull Peer Review

General info
Bandzvlad
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Bandzvlad/Mohammed Khadda
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Mohammed Khadda

Evaluate the drafted changes
I liked the changes that were made. You developed his biography section and art section in a very clear manner. Everything also flows nicely and in a chronological order (which makes for a pleasant reading experience). I only have a few suggestions. I would re-check everything for missing words and spelling errors. Also make sure to cite everything. Right now it looks like you just came up with all of this yourself, so make sure to add a reference section and cite after almost every sentence. Along that vein, I would recommend (where possible) citing other wikipedia pages of some of the artists you mentioned. This will help readers contextualize what they're reading on your page. Lastly, I would love to see some examples of his work. So maybe consider adding some images where you see fit. Otherwise, really well done, and it was cool to learn about Khadda and his work!