User:BannyBavito222/Napir/Seasloth Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

BannyBavito222


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Napir
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Haven't found/Doesn't exist

My Comments:

As there is only about 1-2 sentences in this article, there is probably so much information that can be added. Whether it is something as little as the description of the symbolization of Napir to extensive paragraphs explaining all about the god, I feel as if there are a lot of sub categories that can help this article! Also, there are many sources within the bibliography that I feel will really help the article in general. Overall, the original article is very unsupported in information, but hopefully the sources in the bibliography will be enough to add more information about Napir! Seasloth (talk)

Evaluate the drafted changes
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