User:Banthas/Restriction fragment mass polymorphism/Manvely Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Banthas


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Restriction fragment mass polymorphism


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Restriction fragment mass polymorphism

Evaluate the drafted changes
- the tone of the article is good, stays neutral and has good balance

- the references are well formatted and all the links work as well

- the organization of the article is good. i like that you start with a general overview then go into the methodology then broaden it back out to the application.

- i would say for the methodology section, format the sub-bullet in the section where you say: "This produces two oligonucleotide strands – a 7-mer and a 13-mer." so the bullets match

- pictures might be helpful here if there are any that relate to the topic

- overall a good article, great job!