User:Bap027/Pygmy hog/Seheistand Peer Review

General info

 * Bap027


 * User:Bap027/Pygmy hog

Evaluate the drafted changes
The intro includes an important fact that characterizes the pygmy hog as "the rarest" pig species and that will be helpful to grab the audience's attention and entice them to continue reading (not in a biased way).

The user made significant and important edits to the article, including adding a comparison species that is wildly different from the subject so the audience understands how small the pig actually is to other species of swine.

Under Behavior and Ecology, Bap027 adds special rituals that the species performs and makes them unique from other species, which is important to include. They also include the food that pygmy hogs eat and and the role/niche of the species within their ecosystem and explains how they are crucial to their ecosystem.

The references are from secondary sources and magazines, so these sources should not be particularly biased.