User:Bap377/Cat overpopulation crisis/BRH266 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Bap377


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Bap377/Cat_overpopulation_crisis?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * N/A

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead

I think you have a strong lead. One thing that I think you could clear up is why the cats are unwanted.

Content

I think your content is relevant to the topic. I would have liked to see more information on how the cats got to the point of over population.

Tone and Balance

I think you have done a good job of keeping everything neutral. I think it might be good to add some effect that the over population has on the environment.

Sources and Reference.

You have the right amount of sources and the links all work!

Organization

I like the flow of the article. It kept my attention well. While reading I didn't notice any spelling errors.

Image and Media: N/A

Over all Impressions

Over I think you did a good job. I would just like a little more information on the points above.