User:Barkerke/Language disorder/Liyahyow Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Barkerke


 * Link to draft you're reviewing https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Barkerke/Language_disorder?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Language disorder

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)


 * grammar change in Childhood language disorders paragraph and Causes paragraph
 * overall really good add on content