User:BarrrrbY/The Great Buddha+/Khascall Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

User:BarrrrbY


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:BarrrrbY/The Great Buddha+


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * The Great Buddha+

Lead
I see you've added a short summary of the plot into the lead; that makes sense to me and seems consistent with other film articles. I think this sentence reads a bit more like interpretation than encyclopedic article material: "This story reveals the absurdity of human nature and guides the thinking of ethical philosophy." If this is something critics have said, rephrase it to match what has been said by others.

Content
I see you've added a plot summary; that's consistent with other articles and makes sense as an addition. However, be careful to offer only the most important bits -- the summary looks like it is heading toward being too detailed. You'll want to go back through and copyedit the text once you are done with this section, I see some spelling and grammar errors (copy-paste into google docs works ok).

Tone and Balance
One challenge with this article is making sure you are using an encylopedic tone and not expressing opinions. Film themes are often a matter of opinion. If you can phrase this section in terms of how critics and experts have analyzed the film, the topic can stay. But even so it will need to be trimmed down to just what you have references to directly support: your own interpretation is considered 'original research' in wikipedia terms.

Sources and References
The sources look pretty good. You might find sources in similar articles that also published about your film (e.g. the refs in An Elephant Sitting Still).

Organization
Overall the article is clear and the structure makes sense, but needs copyediting.

Images and Media
It's hard to add images on this topic because they're generally copyrighted (even the poster photo that's in the main article is copyrighted -- if you check the history of your article, you'll see that the image is getting removed by a bot, this is part of keeping 'non-free' images from appearing anywhere other than the article. So please don't re-add it :). We will fix this when it's time to go live with your article.

Overall impressions
In general, I think you've done a lot of good work. Almost there! The main challenges for you right now are tone, especially making the content 'encyclopedic' not opinion, and some copyediting.