User:Barsoumd/Zerene eurydice/Barsoumd Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Lbeqaj (Linda Beqaj)


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Barsoumd/Zerene_eurydice?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Zerene eurydice

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Lead


 * Your intro sentence clearly explains what the article is about.
 * Maybe add another sentence that ties into the topics and paragraphs.

Content


 * The content is relevant and recent.
 * Your last two paragraphs are duplicates of each other, so additional information would need to be added to replace one of them.
 * The wing color variation section was very interesting.

Tone and Balance


 * You maintain a neutral tone throughout the article and don't go off topic.

Sources and Reference


 * A few of your sources are recent, but additional recent sources would make the article more relevant and informative.

Organization


 * The content is very well written and easy to follow.
 * There are a few grammatical errors in the initial sentences, but they are easily fixable.

Images and Media


 * Add some media to help readers visualize your species.
 * You could add pictures or videos of your insect in their natural habitat. It will make the article look nicer and more informative.
 * You could also add a scientific classification graph on your article so add some scientifically needed information.

Overall Impression


 * Great work so far, considering its a first draft.
 * Adding some media will make your article look great and provide additional information.