User:BasilNotCilantro/Nonlinear expectation/Joannetsai Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

BasilNotCilantro


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:BasilNotCilantro/Nonlinear_expectation?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Nonlinear expectation

Evaluate the drafted changes

 * 1) It would be helpful to elaborate more about the topic in the first paragraph. Since nonlinear expectation is not that easy and intuitive to understand to readers, we would want to get some basic information in the very first part of the article. However, the first paragraph doesn't contain much useful explanation.
 * 2) The examples in this article are too simple, basically there are only titles appear in the examples. I think it would be great to elaborate more about the examples, and also explain how it is related to nonlinear expectation.
 * 3) I'm not sure why "expected value" is in the examples section. I can't tell whether it is placed in the wrong section, because I don't understand why it is an example of nonlinear expectation. maybe I missed something, but anyway this part can be improved a little bit.
 * 4) It seems like this article relies largely or entirely on a single source. It would be helpful to introduce citations to it. For example, https://www.sciengine.com/publisher/scp/journal/SSM/47/10/10.1360/N012016-00209?slug=fulltext and https://www.worldscientific.com/doi/abs/10.1142/9789814324359_0019 would be great sources related to nonlinear expectation.