User:Basil B Caraway/Fingerprint powder/Dvigna Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Basil B Caraway


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Basil%20B%20Caraway/Fingerprint_powder?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Fingerprint powder

Content
You added some great information to the article, like in the Lead section, the Composition section and the Factor section. I appreciate that you utilized a variety of different sources for this information, it truly shows that this information is pertinent and correct. I especially like the Nanopowder sub-section, this type new type of powder seems very promising. I encourage you to add to this sub-section because it is the shortest in the Composition section.

Tone and Balance
The tone in which you write is neutral and you do not favour any method of compound that is presented, this is great!

Sources and References
I see that you added references to sections of the article that were missing some, nice work!

Overall Impressions
The information and edits you made certainly improved the article. You improved it because more information was provided, and so a better understanding of fingerprint powder is possible. However, I urge you to add to the sections of the article that are much shorter than the others, like the Colour sub-section and the Nanopowder sub-section.

~Dvigna