User:Basilgreenmint1/American Beach, Florida/Jupiter2457 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Catsdwa and Menace55


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Basilgreenmint1/American_Beach%2C_Florida?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * American Beach, Florida

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead: The lead does a good job of introducing the aspects of environmental justice that the group is adding to the existing article. I think this section could use a couple more sentences to connect it with the rest of the article

Article Body: I think the proposed paragraph sections are very concise and will provide relevant information to the current article. I like how your group will add information to the Abraham Lincoln Lewis page as well since the two are connected. I think the section on segregation and Jim Crow will be important to connect the dots between the existing article and the environmental justice components. I like how your group are ending on the logistics of the beach after the end of the Jim Crow Era.

References: List looks good so far!

Overall Impressions: I think the additions your group is going to make a very helpful contribution to the existing article. Keep up the good work!