User:Basilgreenmint1/Subsistence agriculture/Leslieknope1 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Basilgreenmint1


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Basilgreenmint1/Subsistence_agriculture?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Subsistence agriculture

Evaluate the drafted changes
The article is very informative, has a great lead, tone, and balance. The article seems neutral and gives a good amount of context and information.

I would suggest adding more on the current practices, why those are chosen, and their effects. I would also like to more on how this affects communities, such as adding to the poverty section or even further improving your climate change addition. Overall, your edits/additions add a lot to the article and seem to follow all guidelines.