User:Basketballfan301/Journalism ethics and standards/Phil the Human Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

basketballfan301


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Basketballfan301/Journalism_ethics_and_standards?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Journalism ethics and standards

Evaluate the drafted changes

 * I'm not sure if the section "Add to main info up top" will be part of the article, but it is not feeling neutral in tone. Another sentence in the following section that is not neutral, for example, is "So many journalists today fall victim to this trap hole and become stuck where they are once they have fallen in." This is written like a paper rather than an encyclopedia entry.
 * There's a lot of good sources and good information in the article, especially from peer-reviewed academic sources. However, more information needs to include the citations and anything that is not cited should be removed.
 * I think the source on international journalism ethics by Hafez is great and a source that's really important to include. I'm wondering if there's more you could include from that particular source?
 * There's too much direct quotation in the draft. This could become a copyright infringement, and should be rewritten to avoid issues.

Thank you very much for feedback and i will make adjusts to improve this. Thank you for taking the time to do so.