User:BattIe5tar/Exogenous DNA/BertoHContreras Peer Review

General info

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 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

I was comparing your draft vs the current article, and i thought it was the same. But apparently by looking at previous revisions you've move your draft to the wiki page, so thats good. One thing is you might want a screenshot if you haven't taken one yet from the article before you made the changes, that way when you present your lightning talk, you can show the difference of before vs after.

Introduction
This section is provides a good intro to the material. I would not change much to this section. Nicely done.

Content box gives it a good organization to your page.

Gif/picture gives a good visualization of what your explaining.

History
This section is good and to the point. Would not change this area.

Applications
I would consider adding a very vague paragraph, a sentence or two of the types of applications/mechanism that surround exogenous DNA. You mention transformation and transgenesis, this allows the reader to wonder if there is more applications.

Transformation overall has good content and a good flow.

Transgenesis has good content, try to add more sentences from your own instead of references, if possible.