User:Bayjanae/Ernestine Hayes/The Alaskan Gremlin Peer Review

Lead

-I read the original article and your revisions make the lead of the article more concise while adding additional detail. Furthermore, going into detail to what tribe she belongs to in the lead allows another individual to additional information to your article.

Content

-In the life section your edits and additional information is a good start. I suggest going into detail of what other groups she has been apart of to expand on her article. I can tell that you are working on going into depth with the author’s works and I believe the information would increase the grade of the article.

Tone and Balance

-The Tone and Balance of the article is completely fine. I don’t see any bias within the article.

Sources and References

-Two of the links are not able to be accessed be cause they are no longer available. The links from The Juneau Empire are the ones that do not work.

Organization

-The organizations are fine, streamlined.

Images and Media

-If you can find any pictures from the Wiki Media on Ernestine Hayes it would increase the score of the article.

Overall impressions

-The improvements you added to the article fits perfectly. If finished the additions you were working on, the could possibly be scored higher.