User:Bayjohenderson/Foreign relations of Senegal/MathewLJohnson Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Assigned to: Aprilmayma, Bayjohenderson


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Bayjohenderson/Foreign_relations_of_Senegal?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Foreign relations of Senegal

Evaluate the drafted changes
I really enjoyed reading your draft. It seems to be continuing on the thread of history -- focusing on ECOWAS and the Cold War. These are subjects that can and should be expounded upon. Specific to the ECOWAS section, I enjoyed your outline of explaining Senegal's relationship to ECOWAS and the different military interventions that Senegal has been involved in with ECOWAS. There is definitely a content-gap and you both seem to be working well to expand on the information already there. As far as maintaining the tone and style that Wikipedia wants, this article is exemplary. The tone is neutral and explanatory and the sources also appear to be well-founded and reliable.

Overall, it seems that your work on the article is moving in the right direction.