User:BayleyPlumb/Gene-environment interplay/Dburke11 Peer Review

General info
BayleyPlumb
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:BayleyPlumb/Gene-environment interplay
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Gene-environment interplay

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead questions: Has solid introductory sentence. Has a sentence telling what each section is, that could be fleshed out to a sentence for each topic.

Tone Qs: Obviously need some GxE and epigenetics ( but i assume that will come)

Wikipedia has some equity concerns: Possible addition for the malnutrition - poverty or minorities?

Sources Qs: only one source from the 2020s, few from the past 10 years make sure research is up to date.

source links seem fine (5 I checked)

Organizational Qs: Content seems straightforward and easy to read: minor grammatical errors at spell check level.

Lead topic mentions research study techniques twins etc., I think I section on those would be beneficial.