User:BayleyPlumb/Gene-environment interplay/Hunterambrose Peer Review

General info
I am reviewing DawsonK1, (Gene-environment interplay)
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 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:BayleyPlumb/Gene-environment interplay - Wikipedia
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Gene-environment interplay - Wikipedia:

Evaluate the drafted changes
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Hello DawsonK1. I have reviewed your contributions to the sandbox and the article as a whole. You are off to a great start. The lead is concise and on-point with respect to the edits. I thought that your edits are relevant to the topic. One of your most recent edits, where you added examples, along with a citation, supports the article greatly. I found it well written and clear. One thing I noticed also was that you added a wide variety of references to support your edits. The article is easy to read and flows well. It is also right on track when it comes to neutrality. I found that your edits improved the overall quality of the article. It looks professional and I can tell that you have worked hard on it. The diversity of your references was also nice. I think you and your group members are on the right track. In terms of improvement, I think the only thing I noticed was a tad bit of repetition, but that is extremely nit-picky. I think what you have so far is well done.