User:Baylou402/Cyanea capillata/Newyorkmainer Peer Review

 Note to Peer Reviewer:  I changed my article, it's the Eris militaris one listed under my profile. All of my information is just in the sandbox for that! You could just put the peer review here still and I'll know where to find it!

General info

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Evaluate the drafted changes
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