User:Bbartonshaw SFSU/Cannibalism in Literature/Andreanicolecruz Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(provide username) Bbartonshaw


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Bbartonshaw SFSU/Cannibalism in Literature


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Cannibalism in Literature

Evaluate the drafted changes
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Strengths: You have some great texts supporting your creation article which is a great start for this draft. Great work on also compiling your references as well in the proper section

Room for Improvement: However, I am unsure on what your intention for this article is. Although you have Quick links for the references, there is no further information on these novels that are being mentioned. I think a great additive would be incorporating images of each of these pieces of literature to add more substances. Also, I would mention using proper supporting sources on how these articles discuss cannibalism. With more information involved in your draft, I think this article could be really great! You have a great start, but I think this article needs some more work.