User:Bbartonshaw SFSU/Cannibalism in Literature/Thekeith10 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing? Bbartonshaw

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 * Link to draft you're reviewing https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Bbartonshaw%20SFSU/Cannibalism_in_Literature?preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
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Hey! I think the outline you have for this page is really good! The headings make me excited to see what comes next. What this draft really needs though is some content and some paragraphs explaining some of the examples you have chosen, such as the cannibalism in Morrison's or Dickens' novels. You could list the example and its significance to the literary canon as a whole (like why these are the examples you chose). That said, I love the ambition and you have inspired me to add more sections to my own edits in the article I chose.