User:Bberumen/Eco-evolutionary Dynamics/Kira-g.w.w. Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Bberumen


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Bberumen/Eco-evolutionary_Dynamics/Kira-g.w.w._Peer_Review?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_peer_review


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * User:Bberumen/Eco-evolutionary Dynamics

Evaluate the drafted changes
This piece is really well written and very detailed! I enjoyed reading this, great job! I could only make a few suggestions in which I inserted invisible comments for. The few that I am mentioning are a few grammatical errors and/or word additions/omissions. I think in general a few more wiki links could be added just to give the common reader a little more information and an easier/faster reference for wordings/definitions that they may not be familiar with. I also mention that I think adding more of a genetic component to the development paragraph could give support evolutionary point a little more. Besides these, I really enjoyed reading this topic and love reading about the relationship of ecological effects and evolution! Nice job!