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Assigned Article: Catharine Garmany

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 * Notable Women in the Physical Sciences: A Biographical Dictionary
 * American Men and Women of Science, 2013

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What's missing from the current form of the article: Notes for improvement:
 * An in depth discussion of her work and research
 * Detailed accomplishments from her time as a board member of the Astronomical Society of the Pacific and other positions
 * subheadings to accompany the topic

Currently her research is described as a list of broad topics, "massive stars, evolution and formation; astrological." This list is grammatically confusing and can use plenty of added detail, perhaps up to a paragraph on each area. Further, the article mentions that she received the Annie J. Cannon Award in Astronomy but does not include why or for what research.

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Catharine "Katy" D. Garmany (born March 6, 1946) is an astronomer with the National Optical Astronomy Observatory.[1] . She holds a B.S. (astrophysics), 1966 from Indiana University; and a M.A. (astrophysics), 1968, and Ph.D. (astronomy), 1971, from the University of Virginia.[1] Catharine's main areas of research include the formation and evolution of massive stars and public astronomical education. [1]

Garmany served as board member of the Astronomical Society of the Pacific from 1998 to 2001, and then the vice president from 2001 to 2003.[2] She is most recognized in association with her work on star formation. In 1976, Catharine received the Annie J. Cannon Award in Astronomy from the American Astronomical Society. From 1976 to 1984, Garmany was a research associate at the Joint Institute for Laboratory Astrophysics (JILA). Since 1981, Dr. Garmany has been a professor with in the Department of Astrophysical, Planetary, and Atmospheric Sciences at the University of Colorado. Dr. Garmany a the former chair of JILA and has experience teaching undergraduate, graduate, elementary, and general public audiences through her work with the University of Virginia, University of Colorado, and the  Sommers-Bausch Observatory and Fiske Planetarium, on Colorado's campus. Garmany is also a member of the International Astronomical Union, the American Astronomical Society, the Astronomical Society of the Pacific, and the International Planetarium Society.

 Research 

Garmany's dissertation built upon three years of research on OB association III Cepheus at the Kitt Peak National Observatory in Arizona. Dr. Garmany and her current research team study O- and B-type stars (see OB star), the largest and hottest stars of the galaxy. These stars form in OB association s, which defy typical gravitational bounds. Dr. Garmany was quoted, "an OB association is the closest thing to nothing that is still something." The significance of this research is associated with the star's potential to produce heavy elements when they explode. Garmany says that without OB stars, "there would be no planets like earth."

 Personal History 

Young Catharine reported an interest in astronomy in the fourth or fifth grade, while living in the New York metropolitan area. When her father, a copy editor, brought home readings for Catharine, she recalled a special interest in the works of Franklyn M. Branley, an award-winning children's author who wrote on astronomy. Catharine also enjoyed visits to the Hayden Planetarium with her mother. Catharine was accepted to and attended the Bronx High School of Science. There Catharine met lifelong friends who would also pursue doctorates in chemistry and biology.

In 1970 Catharine was married to George P. Garmany Jr., the two are now divorced. Catharine had two sons, Rick and Jeff, born 1974 and 1980 respectively.

 Garmany and the Annie J. Cannon Award 

Garmany received the Annie J. Cannon Award in astronomy in 1976. This award was distinguished to Garmany for "promise" in her field, as considered by the American Association of University Women. After receiving this award, Garmany was offered an associate position for postdoctoral work at the University of Colorado with the Joint Institute for Laboratory Astrophysics, of which she would later became chair. Garmany articulated the impact of this award on her and for future female candidates, "Young women who enter science begin with low self-esteem. And the ones who leave science feel that they are not doing well enough, when, in fact, they are doing as well as the men."

 Professional History 

Starting 1971 and lasting through 1973, Catharine worked as a research associate at the University of Virginia with the department which awarded her final degree, the Department of Astronomy. Garmany also taught for 3 semesters at Sweet Briar College in Virginia. In 1975, Garmany moved to Colorado when she obtained an associate position researching with JILA and teaching general undergraduate and graduate level astronomy at the University of Colorado.

Garmany was selected as a fellow at the Center for Astrophysics and Space Astronomy (CASA) at the University of Colorado in 1985. Then beginning in 1990 Garmany joined as a fellow of JILA of the University of Colorado, while maintaining her fellowship with CASA. She also lead as director of the Sommers-Bausch Observatory and Fiske Planetarium and a research professor at the University of Colorado. As director of the observatory and planetarium, Garmany was tasked with overseeing graduate students and maintaining the mission of the facility, to support instruction, provide public education through shows and displays, and to reach out to public school groups. Garmany shared at this time that her truest belief was in "pass[ing] the magic on to other people, that is, the true pleasure of figuring something out, not necessarily for the first time ever, but the first time for themselves. This should be shared."

From 2000 to 2003 Dr. Garmany taught as an associate professor at Columbia University and as director of the Astronomy Program with Biosphere 2, a science research facility located in Oracle, Arizona. Some of Garmany's courses at Columbia included galactic and extragalactic astrophysics, observational astronomy, and astrobiology.

Since 2004, Garmany has worked as Sr. Science Education Specialist in the Office of Education and Public Outreach for the National Optical Astronomy Observatory.

NASA IDEAS Grant projects:

 * Collaborative program with local teachers, Boulder Valley Schools
 * REU student mentor: 1993 (Brian Fox), 1995 (Chris Groppi), 1998 (Sarah Lipscy), 2003 (Jennifer Connelly)

Professional Organizations:

 * Member, International Astronomical Union
 * Member, American Astronomical Society
 * Member, Astronomical Society of the Pacific
 * Member, International Planetarium Society



Source Data/Notes
American Men and Women of Science: 20th Edition 

Notable Women in the Physical Sciences: A Biographical Dictionary

current positions : Catharine worked as a fellow astronomer from 1976 to 1980, and later as a senior instructor for The Joint Institution Lab in Astrophysics at the University of Colorado. She worked as director of Fiske Planetarium and Sommers-Bausch Observatory, 1991-present and as Chair of the Joint Institution for Laboratory Astrophysics since 1997.

honors and awards: Annie J. Cannon Award, Am Astron Soc-Am Asn Univ Women in 1976.

Mem: American Astronomical Society; International Astronomical Union.

Research: O-type stars; binaries and stellar atmospheres; stellar kinematics of intermediate age stars.