User:Bcaillouet25/Négritude/DLEE83 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Bcaillouet25


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Bcaillouet25/Négritude


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Négritude

Evaluate the drafted changes
The article indeed provides an ideal insight into the topic. It articulates the issue of equality within the human race. The development of Négritude has exemplified this. The article provides key steps that follow throughout the process. The article also outlined key individuals that necessitated the move. It also describes the biography of Césaire, who is outlined as a politician, poet, and playwright whose origin was Martinique.

There is nothing I would suggest to be changed within the article as it has been articulated well. The authors of the articles have been well acknowledged throughout the paper making it less plagiarized. Each article used as a reference was cited within the paper. They all support the Négritude movement and how it impacted African Americans. The references are also neutral and ideal in support of the whole paper. However, one can note that the information is outdated as it was provided more than seven years ago. It is always advisable that an article is in five years in article writing. There is a need for proper research about the Négritude movement and key relevant things that might not have been addressed in the paper.

The concept that led to the decolonization of the mind is ideal, and I would apply it in my paper. The main aim was to make all of the black people to enjoy better opportunities within society. Damas also outlined key black qualities that helped boost the Négritude movement.