User:Bcant085/Australian Shepherd/AdeolaGA Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

I am reviewing the work from the user Bcanto85


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Bcant085/Australian_Shepherd?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Australian Shepherd
 * Australian Shepherd

Evaluate the drafted changes
Although this is only a draft, you've done a great job at finding elements and facts that are lacking from the original article, especially for the temperament section. You provided reasons for their behaviour and tips on how to manage them, which is awesome since some articles lack that typically. I think the health section could be developed a bit more considering that some may not know what is autoimmune thyroiditis and how it affects the body. Otherwise, your reference section contains up to date and reliable sources, which is good since the original article had only article from the past two decades. Overall this is a great start to your article!