User:Bcant085/Australian Shepherd/Yujun Chen Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Bcant085


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Bcant085/Australian Shepherd
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
Hi Bcant085, I think you did a great job. You have some lead sections that are easy to understand and have a very clear structure. Your content and tone are neutral, and your sources are reliable. Your content enriches the Australian Shepherd Wikipedia. However, I see you use the word "highly recommended" in the Temperament section, I think you can replace it with something more neutral. Yujun Chen (talk) 21:59, 1 April 2022 (UTC)