User:Bcant085/Australian Shepherd/Yzou100 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Bcant085


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Bcant085/Australian_Shepherd?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Australian Shepherd
 * Australian Shepherd

Evaluate the drafted changes
A good start! You start your editorial with the four basics of history, appearance, temperament, and health, which will make it easy for the readers to understand. Your reference section is also detailed and available. The only problem is that I would like to see more details about this species in the history section, including whether they have reproduced outside of Australia due to human intervention. Besides that, I think temperament could be a subheading of appearance or a word like personality to describe the part. Anyway, it's a good try, keep up your work!